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Monday, 29 July 2019

Lonely

I will be sharing a song I have made for my music hurumanu. So what we had to do write two verses and a chorus, but each of them has to be 4 lines long.  But first, we needed an idea, after that we needed to figure out how to tell a story. What I mean by that is every song has a story, for example, a song 'Titanium' tells a story about a person who is being bullied. A song also has at least one metaphor, another example is from the song Titanium the lyrics say 'I am Titanium!'. That is called a metaphor.

Now let's get one with the song...


Lonely
Oh oh oh so lonely 
Life is not over yet 
I can start again 

I might be young
but wise to know that your still here
With me.every day and night oh i love you
There are sometimes in life that think of you so 
I look back, at the time that you were still with me oh oh oh oh oh oh 

I  so alone 
why did you have to go. 
Oh aye lonely 
Lone 
Lone 
Lonely
Looooonely 
Why did you have to go 

I really miss you 
Miss you with my whole heart 
I can’t stop thinking of you 
I wish that you were still here with me everyday 


I  so alone 
why did you have to go. 
Oh aye lonely 
Lone 
Lone 
Lonely
Looooonely 
Why did you have to go 


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