I was in bed the sun was rising. my little sister came in and said. CHARLIE GET UP NOW !! breakfast is reedy. Fine then i'm coming. Thank you mum bye Where are you going said mum. i'm going to the lake fine but be careful she said I well bye. I was walking to the lake then a kite flow pass i went and chased it then …
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 9 March 2018
kite eating tree
this week we have been doing a story about kite eating tree
I was in bed the sun was rising. my little sister came in and said. CHARLIE GET UP NOW !! breakfast is reedy. Fine then i'm coming. Thank you mum bye Where are you going said mum. i'm going to the lake fine but be careful she said I well bye. I was walking to the lake then a kite flow pass i went and chased it then …
5 min after
I screamed for my mum. MUM !! yes said mum.
Nicky Is yelling at me for no Reason. Nicky stop Annoying Your Brother . fine she said. Thank you. now go get some scissors for your brother. OK . then mum cut the string and I Gently touched the ice and me my mum and my little sister walk back home.
I was in bed the sun was rising. my little sister came in and said. CHARLIE GET UP NOW !! breakfast is reedy. Fine then i'm coming. Thank you mum bye Where are you going said mum. i'm going to the lake fine but be careful she said I well bye. I was walking to the lake then a kite flow pass i went and chased it then …
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Hi it is me Libby from school
ReplyDeleteDid you asked Nici first before you put her name on it
But you still did a good gob